Monday, April 20, 2009

20th poem posted!!! - Loop

This poem is weird... there is no capitalization and no punctuation. The idea is that it is a loop. You could start from every other line and read it through all the way around until you hit the line you started at and it would make sense (minus the and and so). And each way gives a different meaning and you can pick which way you like best. This is the order in which I wrote it:

you don’t want
to be here
so don’t be here
just leave
and blow it up
already


but this is the order that I personally like it best:

just leave
and blow it up
already
you don’t want
to be here
so don’t be here

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